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I don't remember
                                                                            when
but I noticed something different.
And I don't know
                                                                            who
but someone else started it.
As for
                                                                            where
you get it, I'm completely stumped.
Oh! And someone had to tell you
                                                                            how
because this seems very new for you.
But i don't really care; the real question is
                                                                            why?
Why would you do it?
This isn't something you or
                                                                            I
would normally do!
I remember how you
                                                                            loved
to joke about people like that.
But now,
                                                                            you
hang out with them, calling them your "friends".
Don't you ever miss how things were
                                                                            before
all this started?
Can't you see what this is doing to
                                                                            you
and your life?
Before you
                                                                            started
people liked you.
Now your old friends are
                                                                            doing
other things to avoid you.
All because you decided to start doing
                                                                            drugs.
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***PLEASE READ THE ENTIRE THING, THEN GO BACK AND READ THE SIDEBAR***


For the record, I don't personally know anyone in this situation. But I know that at least one person feels this way about someone out there.

*~*Inspired by Crank*~*

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:iconaleiki:
This is really cool. I love the rhythm in the poem, and the visual you've put in there. :+favlove:

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98% of Deviants don't know the difference between "your" and "you're." If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch 'em, put this in your signature.
:iconmagnolia-aislynn:
What a cool idea! Very original.
:iconalfafilly:
That's very beautiful. And such an excellent way of alignment! It really seems quite powerful.
I actually know someone in this particular situation... or at least... I think. So this is really touching. :) I miss your poetry.

--
~Blood is thicker than water, but not as thick as ketchup!

"Believe it baby, it talks!" ~Audrey 2; Little Shop of Horrors (1986 film)

*Note: If you see any n00bish comments from me prior to 2009, please ignore them. Hurhur.
:iconalfaangel:
Thaaaanks.
:D
The results of the excitement of a normal day in geometry honors.
Haha

--
"Spend your life playing in the band, it doesn't exactly give you the ultra-cool hipster image." ~ Michelle [American Pie 2]
:iconalfaangel:
Ahhh, not at all!
Look up and read the book Crank.
I can't remember the author's name, but that's how the entire book is written.
It's pretty amazing.
:D

--
"Spend your life playing in the band, it doesn't exactly give you the ultra-cool hipster image." ~ Michelle [American Pie 2]
:iconalfaangel:
Uhhhh thanks?
:D
Awwwh, I'm sorry to hear that.
I hope they come to their senses soon.

And thanks!
I do too.
I should write more, but I've got no inspiration.
Go figure.

--
"Spend your life playing in the band, it doesn't exactly give you the ultra-cool hipster image." ~ Michelle [American Pie 2]

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